03 Jul

It whispered the dreams in my ears,

driving away the perilous fears.

It motivated me to scale a cliff,

when the contention was stiff.

It emboldened me to cross the stormy seas,

to reach the shore at ease.

It gave me immense hope,

thin threads aided as a strong rope.

It rallied with a spark of optimism,

to vandalize the lamp of pessimism.

It tailored the skillful artistry,

to build my castle and monastery.

It helped me to explore exotic locus,

with success as the cardinal focus.

Its beauty never seen,

the origin of strength it has ever been.

It is amalgamated with the build,

never can it be killed.

It stays. . . . . . .

It stays on. . . . . . .

It stays on for Eternity. . . . . . .


Posted by on July 3, 2010 in Poetic Soul


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4 responses to “SOUL

  1. slpmartin

    July 3, 2010 at 4:01 pm

    One feel such a uplifting feeling when reading the poem…so nicely presented.

    • tanznb

      July 3, 2010 at 4:10 pm

      Thanks a lot martin! hope I keep presenting ‘feel good’ poems!

  2. Kavita

    July 6, 2010 at 9:39 pm

    A Fantastic poem of hope, of positivity and LIFE!!!
    I particularly loved the line ‘thin threads aided as a strong rope’ .. I thought it was brilliant… meaningful, true and toooo good !!!
    Keep up the awesomeness!
    Have a bright and pleasant July..

    • tanznb

      July 7, 2010 at 3:04 am

      Thanks a lot and I hope that I will be in a position to post more poems!


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